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[Downfall]

alright i had to write a resume for my Media writing class
this is my 1st draft
and i left out the personal info at the top for a reason :)

it had to be 1 page long and this is when put on paper. Everything is also tabed and bullited too

I was wondering what some of you thought abotu it who actualy have to read and go over these things.



be as critical as you want(no flaming please)

Education

Liberty High School

Virginia Polytechnic Institute and State University
Communication Studies with a focus in mass
media


Experience

Fauquier Springs Country Club
Golf Cart Maintenance
Pro Shop

Robert Trent Jones Country Club
Caddie

Prince William County Public Schools
Alvey Elementary
Independent Contractor
Garfield High School
Moving crew: loading and
unloading

Computer Skills

AutoCAD
Adobe PhotoShop
Adobe Image Ready
Microsoft FrontPage
3D Studio Max
Maya
Microsoft Word
Microsoft Excel

Activities
Staff Editor of Forte: The High School Literary Magazine
Writer for Patriot: High School Newspaper
Concert Staff member for Virginia Tech Student Union
(VTU)
Special Event Staff member for Virginia Tech Student
Union (VTU)
Climbing Club

[RAD]

Not PhotoShop, just Photoshop. Other than that its good and very detailed resume.

[TRUCKIN]

put "time management" under skills, if you can tell time.

[Kain]

Under "Experience" you listed "Pro Shop" now by that do you mean that you worked at a brothel, or just used there services? :D

But Seirously. thats a good resume, mines a lot smaller because i dont like to diveldge into what iv been up to all these years... wich isnt helpful when looking for work heres a preveiw

Kains Resume

Name: Kain

School:

Experience:

Contacts:

Other: Please hire me, i need food and clothing!!